You mean you're writing new chapter? Or adding something into existing one? If you added something - then I didn't notice it (read ch. 13. and 14. and can't find anything new, maybe that's because everything fits well and I've got not best memory).
Anyway, no matter what...
Wait.
I'm dumb. I didn't even look into your gallery on da -.- And sorry I don't have time to read this new chapter
I'm going to Ukraine for this week, and unfortunately my phone won't read all those special characters. I'll try anyway.
Expect real feedback in about week.